Poem by Mia

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Postby MiaDivine » Thu Jun 07, 2001 12:35 pm

WOULD YOU<BR><BR>If I asked you<BR>to take me away,<BR>would you abide<BR>or make me stay?<BR>If I loved you<BR>in every way,<BR>and I begged you<BR>could you do the same?<BR>If I needed for you <BR>to understand,<BR>could you accept me<BR>for all that I am?<BR>If I died away<BR>and faded to black,<BR>would you miss me<BR>and want me back?<BR>If I told you <BR>I was bitterly numb,<BR>would you revive me<BR>until feelings come?<BR>If I whispered<BR>that I'm all alone,<BR>would you hold me<BR>or turn to stone?
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Postby Sagwyes » Thu Jun 07, 2001 4:43 pm

'Tis beautiful.
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Postby erinhue » Fri Jun 08, 2001 11:17 pm

<img src="i/expressions/face-icon-small-wink.gif"border=0> Mia, divine<img src="i/expressions/face-icon-small-wink.gif"border=0>
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Postby Arthedainian » Tue Jun 12, 2001 5:13 am

That is dark and beautiful Mia!
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Postby MiaDivine » Mon Jun 18, 2001 9:02 am

Thank you ::bows::
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Postby TheSeeker » Mon Jun 18, 2001 10:40 pm

Aye! Three cheers! ::claps widly::<BR>Tis special I think, it makes me mindly<BR>Of my own work, how boresom it is<BR>Getting tired of poetry and this writing 'Friz'<BR>I only wish<BR>I were as good as this<BR>Lovely dark poem<BR>like a mysterious kiss<BR><BR>I'm getting writer's block now,<BR>But the poem was great<BR>Maybe someday I'll bore you<BR>With mine, which you'll hate<BR>Oh well, who cares, I hated 'em too<BR>But I'm losing inspiration in this writing fondoo<BR>Goodbye, farewell, you can tell I bored<BR>Don't make me write more<BR>I do have a sword!<BR>(I don't know how to use it, though,<BR>And oh, that was a dream! Do'h!)<BR>(and although sometimes I do not rhyme, bear with me friend, I’m better at times!)<BR>
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