To and From OOC - TaF II Returns!

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To and From OOC - TaF II Returns!

Postby Rainfield » Wed Oct 08, 2003 2:38 pm

I don't know what happened... I tried to update but everything came out wierd...


Anyway... To and From II starts on page 11

Hope to rp with ya!
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Postby *Hryveriel* » Wed Oct 08, 2003 4:44 pm

wow,<BR>this is nifty. (i can't believe i just said that!)What kind of land are there going to be inthis little orb? it does sound a lot like a video game. maybe Jak and dakster(sp?) or final fantisy. wha abou angel spirit things? i was thinking my chara could be the gardian of this province and she was from a different world far away. maybe she could be the person all the other people go to in this village. like she the only one, like herself, there. ok if that is ok then i will give youa bio of sorts. <BR>ttyl,<BR>*Hryveriel*(Hry)
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Postby Rainfield » Wed Oct 08, 2003 5:51 pm

I was thinking we would have worlds of all different settings.<BR>ex: Regular world, Mountainous world, Water world, Desert world, Forest world, etc. (Man this is going to be a lot like zelda) anyway we could also have a light world, and a dark world. It basically depends on how quickly we move through each world. <BR><BR>I'm thinking that all the seperate worlds are going to have fractions of the another orb, that with all of them combined can re-open our main characters world. Because the world that our boy lives in right now is actually going to become the other orb'd world. Confused?<BR><BR><BR>OR<BR><BR><BR>Our main character's world becomes an orb, and that orb gets broken into fractions. And our main character would get to visit each fraction of the orb and try to rebuild his world. Then once it is complete, he can use his orb to go back into his world. Confused?<BR><BR><BR>Both are directions we could go in.<BR><BR><BR>Also does Rubie sound or look to feminine to be our main characters name? (he will get older, I plan on him being in his late teens through the thick of the story) So does Rubie sound to girlish to be our guys name?<BR><BR><BR><BR>Edit:<BR><BR>O Yeah! i forgot your question lol...<BR><BR>Yea your character sounds good, however if she is to come along on the journey she can't be one of those AWESOME ANGEL GODS!!!!! She has to have her weakness's. But if you just want her to stay in the Utopia, then that is fine, she can be one of those AWESOME ANGEL GODS!!!!!
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Postby *Hryveriel* » Wed Oct 08, 2003 6:48 pm

Hey,<BR>no she won't stay in the Utopia, she'll travell with your chara. Are you shootin' for something that starts with "R"? Maybe, Rubi, with a short "i" sound. Rubin, Ruburus? whatever. I think Rubie would be original though. And what do you mean by AWESOME ANGEL GOD? is it a part of the story or are ya just trippin'. haha <img src="http://www.tolkienonline.com/mb/i/expressions/face-icon-small-smile.gif"border=0> <img src="http://www.tolkienonline.com/mb/i/expressions/face-icon-small-happy.gif"border=0> <img src="http://www.tolkienonline.com/mb/i/expressions/face-icon-small-tongue.gif"border=0> ><img src="http://www.tolkienonline.com/mb/i/expressions/face-icon-small-smile.gif"border=0> I'm gonna try to start a bio tonight. if i don't get it here tonight, i will tomorrow, promise. BTW: i do tend, sometimes, to forget what RPs i'm in, so if i don't post for a while e-mail me. it's on my bio.<BR>ttyl,<BR>Hry
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Postby Rainfield » Wed Oct 08, 2003 7:18 pm

What I mean by Awesome Angel God!!!!! is that you said you wanted your character to be an angel chick, and I just wanted to make sure that she wasn't incredibly awesome. Cause i've rp'd with a few people that seem to make their characters unbelievably awesome, and thats just not very interesting. <BR><BR>As long as your character has flaws, i'm fine with it.<BR><BR>I decided to go with Ruwie, not too off the wall, but not an everyday name.
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Postby Rainfield » Wed Oct 08, 2003 10:23 pm

I'm at the point where knew chars. can come in, I really wanted to get through the intro ASAP <img src="http://www.tolkienonline.com/mb/i/expressions/face-icon-small-wink.gif"border=0><BR><BR><BR>Also,<BR><BR>For whoever joins this thread, please try and keep your posts detailed and try your best to spell correctly. I know I have a lot of mess ups as well, but I try most of the time to proofread my posts before clicking the Done! button. <BR><BR>Thanks
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Postby *Hryveriel* » Thu Oct 09, 2003 10:07 am

OK,<BR>nobody post in the IC till i do. i have the perfect thing. i'll post later because i don't have time now.<BR>ttyl,<BR>Hry
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Postby *Hryveriel* » Thu Oct 09, 2003 3:35 pm

Ok,<BR>heres the bio. i don't know wether you have any beef on some of the things i put in there. like the overlord. you just have to see. just let me know what you think. BTW Nike was originaly a greek word that meant victory and they would carve a figure of a woman with wings--Nike. ok whatever, ttyl<BR>Hry<BR><BR><BR>Name: Orian<BR><BR>Age: Unknown<BR> <BR>Race: Nike (an Angel race)<BR> <BR>Side: Good<BR> <BR>Personality: Kind and gentile. Very patient and honorable. She tends to be overcautious and a bit over protective of her village.<BR> <BR>Appearance: Extremely beautiful. Very thin and agile. She has a fine nose and thinner lips (not too thin). Tan complexion but not dark. Very large white wings. Slightly curvy.<BR> <BR>Gender: Female<BR><BR>Height: 5’ 8’<BR> <BR>Weight: Unknown<BR><BR>Eyes: Crystal blue<BR> <BR>Hair: Very long, strait, black.<BR><BR>Abilities: She has some magic, but not too much. She has the ability to heal herself and others. And she can pull energy out of herself to fire upon enemies (energy blast thingy). But she can’t do that much because she will exhaust herself. She has wings like an Angel, and can fly (Duh!). Since she is the spirit of the wind, she can control it, but it also takes much energy to do so.<BR> <BR>History: She was sent to the Utopia buy her great Over Lord. Herself and her sisters were all sent to different places inside the Orb. There are others like her, her sisters. Each one of them is a different element. Orian is of the Wind. <BR>Her Over Lord is a Nike also. He is the father of herself and her sisters. Not much is known about him, even to his daughters. All they call him is the Over Lord. <BR> <BR>Transportation: Her ability to fly.<BR><BR>Weapons: Her powers and a golden scepter.<BR><BR>Occupation: She is the guardian of the Utopia. She flies around the city all day, keeping watch for enemies. Thought not many enemies dwell there. She is the high councilor of the village. All the people of her village come to her with their problems. She grows weary of listening to their little disputes and quarrels. But she would not forsake them either. And she would never leave without knowing they were safe.<BR><BR>Weakness: Her wings are very fragile (but she can carry others and fly at the same time, just not big, heavy people). If broken, they take large amounts of energy to heal. By doing so, she looses the ability to defend herself with her energy blast and wind powers.<BR><BR>hope thats ok....<BR>
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Postby Rainfield » Thu Oct 09, 2003 5:44 pm

OK everything seems ok, except a few minor details...<BR><BR>First of All, <BR>No darkness or evil can enter Utopia so there is no reason for her to fly around and protect the city.<BR><BR>Secondly,<BR>Since Orion is an extremly powerful being, were gonna have to come to an agreement on the extent of helping your going to be doing. <BR>I'm thinking your going to be helping out with traveling around each world. You can sorta protect me out in the world, but I've decided that at the end of each world i'll have to fight through a temple or something (dang this is so much like a video game) and with that i'm not sure Orion should be aloud to help Ruwie in there. Cause if she did it would end up being a walk in the park.<BR><BR>Tell me what you think....maybe she could help me in the temple's, but just not at the "boss" part or whatever.<BR><BR><BR>Rather than that everything is peachy<BR><BR><BR><BR>EDIT:<BR><BR>Ok...<BR>I just had a big thought, and I have to get this down before I forget it. Since not a whole lot of people are joining, I'm going to make up new characters as we go along. I have a bunch of them in my mind but will get to those when we get to certain places. <BR><BR>This is going to be awesome, because i'm a media arts and animation student and i'm going to be able to draw all these pimpy characters out. And then once I have the right equipment I could get them into the computer... WHOA!!! that would be awesome...<BR><BR>*dashes off to scetch pad*<BR><BR>
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Postby *Hryveriel* » Thu Oct 09, 2003 7:17 pm

Haha I’ve done that before. I'm not a professional artist but I have been in a rush to draw so I don't forget it. Anyways... 'bout Orian. Ok since there is now evil in Utopia, let’s say she has taken a vow to help those in need that come there. is that ok? and for the temple thing. Maybe there could be a prophecy of an explorer(Ruwie) that will come to this place and discover all that is hidden there. it sounds a little sketchy, I know. ok, she is sworn to help the explorer everywhere he goes except the temple. Now what would be cool was if she didn't bring the up to him until he was about to go into the temple. I know it's very shady but I’m sure we can touch it up a little, right? ok I hope it alright...<BR>ttyl,<BR>Hry<BR>
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Postby Rainfield » Thu Oct 09, 2003 8:51 pm

I just sketched out Ruwie... he's awesome looking. He's in a left side viewpoing pose, and he's got a guitar under his right arm, and the orb in his left hand. He looks to be about 12 to 14. He has a bandana on with busting out the bottom. He's also got his little pouch hangin around his waste... *wipes tear* I love the little dude. <BR><BR>Oh yea...<BR><BR>Thats cool about Orion, she could basically be like the Ruler/Elder of Utopia. Also, I want Orion to be the one to explain everything about the orb to Ruwie, and I want Orion to be the one to give Ruwie his weapon. Which is a long katana that everytime he kills a monster/person an feather drops from the tip of the sword. Another thing about the sword is that if Ruwie kills something or someone who is evil, a white feather drops, BUT if he kills someone that is good a black feather drops. Cool huh? Just call the sword, the Angel Sword!<BR><BR>On the prophecy idea:<BR><BR>I don't like prophecy's, especially in video games, and since this is a video game type story I really want to stay away from that. I feel that is how all fantasy stories are. I want this story to be different in the fact that no one knew this was coming, and there was no pre-destined plan. I really dislike it when stories use a pre-destined plan plot line. I don't want Ruwie to have some untapped godly power, I just want him to be normal, who learns to have awesome power. <BR><BR>HOWEVER<BR><BR>the orb on the otherhand can have some mysterious power behind it that you can explain to Ruwie. And for the temple/dungeon dealy, how about since your such an awesome being that somehow your forbidden to enter the temple, or certain parts of the temple. Lets say that there are seals that you can't cross since your such a holy being, or something like that. <BR><BR>ps:<BR><BR>I really like the direction were going in, I can't wait to see your first post. Maybe if this one gets finished we could make a sequel!!!!! On second thought, lets get through the first one first <img src="http://www.tolkienonline.com/mb/i/expressions/face-icon-small-wink.gif"border=0>
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Postby narnensul » Fri Oct 10, 2003 5:33 am

Still drawing Rainfield? <img src="http://www.tolkienonline.com/mb/i/expressions/face-icon-small-wink.gif"border=0> I haven't seen you on the boards lately.<BR><BR>I'd love to join if I may, its rare to see a thread with more than one world. I can't give you much to work off of...But when I was reading the ooc, I got an idea...I don't know if its good, but here it goes...A young girl, maybe a few years older than your character, who was found in Utopia some time ago, she doesn't remember from whence she came or how she got to Utopia. However she has adapted to life in Utopia. But at the arrival of Ruwie, she is instantly intrigued by the other worlds out there and their people. In appearance she is human (and she is human) but she looks much different than everyone in Utopia. I understand it would be a delicate character, and if written wrong can appear to be very overdramatic or overdone or just plain boring. I can also think up of a completely different character, if you don't want that one. Hey...I'm flexible about it.<BR><BR>Glad to see you up and posting again.
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Postby Rainfield » Fri Oct 10, 2003 8:42 am

Hey Narnesul!!!! Yea, Prison of Raloh got so drawn out that I just lost my spice for rp'ing. But happily i'm back in it trying knew stuff.<BR><BR>I was thinking of a girl character like that actually. I was sorta thinking that she was actually the orb's truthful owner. (I know she's a kid but later own in the story we all grow up, so it's cool)But she doesn't know she's the owner, when she lost the orb, her memory was taken away from her. And ever since she lost the orb, she was taken to Utopia for safe keeping. (we can say that your family has always kept the orb and for some reason the baddies want you dead) And with the presence of the orb around, she gets interested in other worlds, however she has no idea she is the orb's truthful owner. Maybe there's a temple somewhere where we can regain her memory or something like that. <BR><BR>Any of that make sense? <BR><BR>Hryveriel, please make your post soon so we can keep moving <img src="http://www.tolkienonline.com/mb/i/expressions/face-icon-small-wink.gif"border=0><BR><BR><BR><BR>EDIT:<BR><BR><BR>Oh and I have tons of drawings of Rainfield =)
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Postby *Hryveriel* » Fri Oct 10, 2003 11:33 am

Ok,<BR>I like the idea about the seals. Maybe she can't challenge that power...kind of like a Maiar and challenge a Maiar. Maybe whatever is behind the seal is equal or greater to her power. I’ll try to post soon. Now she'll be very skeptical about Ruwie. Ok, I have another idea, let’s say, narnensul, your chara., Got sucked up into this place the same way Ruwie did. That way, I could introduce you two. I don't know what you think about it but get back to me ASAP.<BR>ttyl,<BR>Hry<BR>
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Postby Rainfield » Fri Oct 10, 2003 1:22 pm

Thats cool, I like the idea of you introducing us to each other. Thats good about being skeptical, but since Ruwie has the orb your not aloud to protest with his decision, and his decision will be to go find the fragments of his world in other worlds.<BR><BR><BR>EDIT:<BR><BR><BR>OK... I've gotta do some writing here so i'm gonna do one of the big characters bio.<BR><BR>Name: Cudgel<BR><BR>Age: Same as Ruwie's (12 to 14)<BR><BR>Eye's: Brown<BR><BR>Skin: Average skin tint (white with a light tan)<BR><BR>Hair: Silverish White (think Sepherioth from FFVII or Riku from Kingdom Hearts), parted down the middle. The front part of his hair comes down to his chin, but the back is cut shorter and sticks back.<BR><BR>Appearance: Around same height as Ruwie, except a tad bit taller. (maybe an inch or two) and a little bit more bony.<BR><BR>Background: Friendly kid who lives in Utopia, and has big dreams of exploring. Cudgel hates being left out of things, and often becomes jealous. He befriends Ruwie from the moment he appears on Utopia. And thats all i'm going to reveal about this kid for a while.
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Postby narnensul » Fri Oct 10, 2003 9:11 pm

Rainfield, great idea for the girl. Give me some time to work things out and give her a proper name and appearance. She won't come into the story until after Hry's character, it will give me ample time to form her. If you have any more suggestions, keep them coming.<BR><BR>I would love to see Rainfield and Ruwie! I never got to see Rainfield in the old rp but he sounded so cool. If you have a scanner and the time send some to me! <A HREF="mailto:Dennm2@aol.com">Dennm2@aol.com</A><BR><BR>
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Postby Rainfield » Fri Oct 10, 2003 10:04 pm

I wish my scanner still worked or I would right away, but my scanner stopped working a long time ago <img src="http://www.tolkienonline.com/mb/i/expressions/face-icon-small-sad.gif"border=0>, I'll see if I can find someone with one. <img src="http://www.tolkienonline.com/mb/i/expressions/face-icon-small-wink.gif"border=0><BR><BR><BR>interesting tidbit:<BR><BR>If anyone was wonderin, (i'm sure you weren't but I thought this would be an interesting add in) music is obviously going to be a big part of this thread, seeing as how Ruwie travels with his guitar. And we will find out later that Cudgel is a master at the piano (this will make sense later on in the story, seeing as how Cudgel will be HUGE in the story). If you wish to pick an instrument that you play, your more than welcome to.<BR> Keep it reasonable, and by reasonable I mean no electric guitars or bass guitars by any means. If you can think up a instrument that would fit nicely to your character then it might just be a fun thing to rp on. I loved writing the first post on where Ruwie was playing guitar, I loved describing that scene. I just thought some of you might enjoy that element of the story. <BR><BR>Don't worry Ruwie and Cudgel arn't going to become rock stars or anything, but thier music will give a certain aspect to the story that is very beneficial and interesting.<BR><BR>I will introduce Cudgel once Hryverial makes her post.
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Postby narnensul » Sat Oct 11, 2003 9:36 pm

Scanners...never understood them, never will. Mine's just collecting dust. <img src="http://www.tolkienonline.com/mb/i/expressions/face-icon-small-wink.gif"border=0> I hope you find someway to get them on your computer!<BR><BR>Alright, I was stuck in a car for two hours today with nothing to look at but the beautiful fall foliage and the road, so I had ample time to think about the character. I hope this is something you had in mind, I'm working off of your post.<BR><BR>Name: Lynn<BR><BR>Age: 12 or 13<BR><BR>Appearance: Long brown hair. Lynn wears it down or up in a strange fashion with twists and braids. She is thin and slightly over average height for a girl. She has golden skin and is pretty for her age. Her garb is eclectic, she wears all sorts of strange clothing, which adds to the mysterious aura that seems to follow her.<BR><BR>Background: Her past is quite hidden, even from herself. Her memories were taken from her and all she was left with was a name. She remembers arriving in Utopia, but does not remember the world from whence she came. Strangely enough, her desires to know her past or family have never been awakened. Lynn is content in Utopia, but she knows she is not Utopian-born, her tendencies and way of thinking are quite different. She is liked well enough in Utopia and is not scorned because of her odd ways, but she is often found alone.<BR><BR>Thats about as far as I've gotten. For an instrument I was thinking a flute thing or harp...I'm not sure yet. Great idea for introduction Hry. I await most patiently for your post. <img src="http://www.tolkienonline.com/mb/i/expressions/face-icon-small-wink.gif"border=0>
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Postby Rainfield » Sat Oct 11, 2003 10:32 pm

I like her Nar!<BR><BR>Also:<BR><BR>Hry, I hate to be pushy but I really wish you would post soon. It's been several days since you said you would get it up, and me and Nar are waiting to see your post since you told us not to post till you do. If it's not up rather soon, I'm going to continue on with the story. I think it's in best interest of the story if we keep it going at a fluid manner.<BR><BR><img src="http://www.tolkienonline.com/mb/i/expressions/face-icon-small-smile.gif"border=0>
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Postby narnensul » Sun Oct 12, 2003 5:04 am

Translating what Rainfield said....*poke poke poke* <img src="http://www.tolkienonline.com/mb/i/expressions/face-icon-small-wink.gif"border=0><BR><BR>Quikie question. So if theres more than one orb, Ruwie has one, and the other is shattered? And you want to collect the shattered one thats scattered all over the seperate worlds? I think I'm catching on, just give me a few days. <img src="http://www.tolkienonline.com/mb/i/expressions/face-icon-small-smile.gif"border=0>
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Postby Rainfield » Sun Oct 12, 2003 10:40 am

One orb is the Utopian orb that lets him travel to and from Utopia and also to many other worlds. But the world Ruwie comes from is, well I guess a "special" world, and it has it's own orb. And yes Ruwie is traveling around to find the pieces of his world's orb.<BR><BR>EDIT:<BR><BR>OK for heads up puposes, i'm going to give everyone a rundown of how I hope things are going to flow within the story. This is just a rough outline of our time in Utopia. We can add and take out stuff depending up how each post flows and the amount of details in each post. I just read over the first three introduction posts and the run together nicly IMO. Hopefully we won't spend to long in each area that were dealing with, because I really want to make it to the ending of the story. If it's awesome we will make a sequel. But i really don't want to start a story and not finish it.<BR><BR>OUTLINE for UTOPIA:<BR><BR>Utopia:<BR>Ruwie's arrival post<BR>Cudgel's intro post<BR>Orion intro/Explanation of Utopia from Orion<BR>Lynn's intro/ Lynn and Ruwie's meeting<BR>Off to the first world <BR><BR>PS: I will do this for each area that we go to<BR><BR>PS(again): I will post Ruwie's arrival post/ and possibly Cudgel's intro post tonight after I get off work, which is around 7 central time... hopefully <img src="http://www.tolkienonline.com/mb/i/expressions/face-icon-small-wink.gif"border=0>
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Postby *Hryveriel* » Mon Oct 13, 2003 7:21 am

oh my,<BR>i am soooo sorry for not posting. i don't really have an excuse either. please forgive me. i'm posting right now. i really am!<BR>ttyl(sorry),<BR>Hry
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Postby Rainfield » Mon Oct 13, 2003 9:53 am

YEAH!!!!<BR><BR>I'm so glad you post Hry! I was worried that you were gone <img src="http://www.tolkienonline.com/mb/i/expressions/face-icon-small-sad.gif"border=0><BR><BR>So glad that your still here, and I enjoyed your IC post as well, it went along nicly with the story. I'll introduce Cudgel soon, and his older brother Gabriel (who is going to be our evil guy). I'll give Gabriel's bio.<BR><BR>Name: Gabriel <BR><BR>Age: Late teens, Cudgel's older brother<BR><BR>Eyes: Dark Yellow<BR><BR>Hair: A silver gray. It has a very silver look to it, but it's very dark. He has a few strands parted down the middle but most of his hair sticks back.<BR><BR>Overview: A moderatly tall teen who is very protective over Cudgel, but has a tendancy to become wildly out of control. His instument is the violin. Gabriel has many talents, and is a very good fighter. <BR><BR><BR>Gabriel won't go bad for a long time, in fact he's gonna be that playin both sides guy for the time being. We won't find out who our main bad guy is for a while. That demonic wolf thing was just like a guardian of our main bad guy <img src="http://www.tolkienonline.com/mb/i/expressions/face-icon-small-wink.gif"border=0>
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Postby narnensul » Mon Oct 13, 2003 4:39 pm

Hmm, should I post an entry for Lynn, but not yet have her introduced to Ruwie? Or keep waiting?<BR><BR>I loved both your posts, Hry and Rainfield, by the way! <img src="http://www.tolkienonline.com/mb/i/expressions/face-icon-small-wink.gif"border=0><BR><BR>What's this with Lynn and Cudgel? <img src="http://www.tolkienonline.com/mb/i/expressions/face-icon-small-wink.gif"border=0>
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Postby Rainfield » Mon Oct 13, 2003 4:40 pm

Ok i just posted again.<BR><BR>Was I able to capture the type of char. that Gabriel is? I was tryin' to do a a little foreshadowing, but I was tryin' to still get that older brother who gives younger brother a hard time thing going. <BR><BR>Although Gabriel is a perverted punk, I think he's rather cool. In my head I got all this crap that he's gonna pull later, he's gonna be awesome, but a very big butthole at the same time. <BR><BR>Once we get Lynn's intro down, and the explanation of whats going on, this story can really take off!!!!!!!<BR><BR>Any thoughts on what type of world we should go to first?
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Postby *Hryveriel* » Tue Oct 14, 2003 7:51 am

hey,<BR>thanx. i added in the temple keepers just to make it more interesting, i was kinda getting bored with it. Rain, tell me if you have and problems with my last post.<BR>ttyl,<BR>Hry
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Postby Rainfield » Tue Oct 14, 2003 10:20 am

The temple keepers are fine, but here's a quick thought...<BR><BR>What would you say to them turning evil? Or getting used for evil purposes? I was thinking they might be spy's for the bad guy or something, but we must be careful seeing as how no enter can be within Utopia.<BR><BR>BUT!!!! (startling discovery)<BR><BR>What if... The orb that Ruwie's going to try and rebuild is going to be the only portal that allows evil to enter Utopia???? that could be interesting, then Orian would have some serious stuff to attend to <img src="http://www.tolkienonline.com/mb/i/expressions/face-icon-small-wink.gif"border=0><BR><BR><BR>EDIT:<BR><BR><BR>I shoot sorry Nar, I didn't even see your post up there. Yes please post whenever your up to it.<BR><BR>Nothing is going on between Cudgel and Lynn, Gabriel's just a typical older brother who gives Cudgel a hard time. Gabriel's in the 16 year old to 18 year old phase, which we all know thats the "I'm a pervert" phase, and everything has to deal with that sorta manner. Cudgel and Lynn are friends but nothing more <img src="http://www.tolkienonline.com/mb/i/expressions/face-icon-small-wink.gif"border=0> <BR><BR>Hehe, I love Gabriel. He's gonna be such a punk, but an awesome one at that. <BR><BR>Also I figured out how we can do the temple. Everyone is allowed to fight in the temple, but everyone will split up. The only thing is that Orian will not be able to fight the "boss" at each temple because she's too powerful and it would end up being a push over. And I thought it would be too dangerous for Lynn, because I never really invisioned her as a fighter, but we can discuss that matter later.<BR><BR>For a while, Gabriel and Orian will be the groups main fighters. But the story will center around Ruwie, and somewhat around Lynn and Cudgel. <BR><BR><BR>Sound cool with everyone?
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Postby TassleHoffe » Tue Oct 14, 2003 6:10 pm

First of all Rainfield, this idea is splenind. It sort of has a Never Ending Story feal to it. The one thing your stroy lacks IMO is a character that brings a tad of comic relief. I was thinking what a better role than the next door neighboor stumbling apon the orb while searching your house for you. I was thinking his name would be Buttons(as an infant he teethed on buttons and the name stuck). I picture him to be about 8-10 years old. I chose such a young age becuase I wanted him to be oblivous to the world around him, such as a little orb cotaining a Utopian world. Buttons parents are workaholics and always depend on Ruwie to be his babysitter. One day Buttons parents were not home as usual, and he decided to go over to Ruwie's house to ask him if he wanted to play nintendo. Buttons ventured up to Ruwie's room after greeting Ruwie's mother and found the room to be empty. Buttons only saw a spherical object on the floor and thought it was a ball to play with. As a rseult, he was warped into the Utopia world where he thinks he is dreaming. ::Could Buttons be the arch villan of the story? If not, don't worry just an idea I had:: Anyways, Buttons is amazed by this world and the first place he visits is a candy warehouse. While exiting the warehouse with a bag of candy and lolly pop in hand, he runs into Ruwie. Ruwie was extremely befuddled of why the little boy he babysitts was in the Utopia! Maybe Buttons could also accompany Ruwie's adventures in the world(everytime he goes over to be babysat).<BR><BR>I am going to leave it there for you. Please respond I think this idea I have is a good addition to the story.<BR><BR>Thanks, <BR>~Tass~
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Postby Rainfield » Tue Oct 14, 2003 6:37 pm

Although I see where your comin from, I don't think it's going to work. Seeing how Ruwie still has the orb, (he never lost it) and the fact that Buttons humor wouldn't really mesh well with the story. Also, Ruwie is only around 12 years old, making him a pretty young babysitter. <BR><BR>The story as a whole is fairly lighthearted. And the whole candy factory/ nintendo thing couldn't work because the worlds are not that technologically advanced. The setting is pretty old style fantasy. <BR><BR>Also, Ruwies world completly vanished. The only reason Ruwie didn't vanish with it was because he had the orb. So unless Buttons were to live in Utopia he would have no way in getting there. <BR><BR>Although Gabriel and Cudgel will both turn out fairly rotten, Gabriel especially, the interaction between the two will be the type of humor that I think will go better with the mood of the story. Because if all goes to plan, this story will eventually lead into a dark themed story. As of right now it's fairly lighthearted, but will eventually lead into something very serious. <BR><BR>EX: Characters will die.... Good, not only Evil characters, are going to die... (scary thought... I know)<BR><BR><BR>However...<BR><BR><BR>I have no objections to you joining the story, I just feel Buttons might not be the best choice. Your more than welcome to revise your char to better fit the story.
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Postby narnensul » Tue Oct 14, 2003 6:49 pm

Just friends...haha<BR><BR>I love Gabriel! However mean and nasty he might be. He's one of those characters that you dislike terribly, but think he's cool at the same time for just being so true.<BR><BR>Lynn is definately no warrior, I never imagined her to be one either. Though she can hold her own quite well when needed. I wouldn't want her to have experience with any weapon because being in Utopia most of her life, weapons are not used, and in her previous world she was too young to start whipping blades around.
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