Tengwar/Angerthas question for Isildilmë

[Cillendor]

Hey Isildilmë,

I have a big request for you. I've been working on a translation project for the Lay of the Children of Húrin, and I finally have completed transcribing the first section of it into Tengwar and Angerthas. Would you be willing to proofread it for me? I can't tell up from down anymore, so fresh eyes would be very helpful.

Thanks!

Tengwar/Angerthas
Latin orthography