Wandering, two thumbs up. I just read it, although I wish I had seen it sooner. I modified my profile. Could anybody just tell me if they think it's good or not?<BR><BR>Name: Rykago<BR>Age: 28<BR>Alliance: Mordor<BR>Race: Men<BR>Eye color: Murky Brown<BR>Hair color: Dark Brown<BR>Gender: Male<BR>Weapons: Composite Long Bow, self-made Broadsword, and a shield with the symbol of the cross upon it.<BR><BR>Appearance: Rykago is almost always seen with full armor on, which is a full suit of plate armor, plate guantlets, and a "bucket" helmet, which has two eye slits and holes punched in it for breathing. He has a golden sheath, which he polishes every other day. If there is no fighting, he wears tough leather shoes and he doesn't have his armor on. He has a blue tunic, and silky green pants, from Sauron for Rykago's many victories. If you were to get a strand of hair, it would stand 1 1/2" up. Is it all brushed back, so it is not that thick. His hair is very thin also. His skin color is a peach color. He has a deep wound running from his left hand to his elbow, which he received after fighting in his first battle against Gondor. He weighs 130 pounds, so he is fairly thin. He is just right to be able to ride his horse, Pyros, because with all the armor, Pyros weighs about 250 pounds. Pyros is a rare breed. He is pure white, with some dark white streaks going across his body. <BR><BR>History: Rykago was born into the Kingdom of Gondor. His mother had died years ago, due to an unknown disease, so all he had was his father, Ithulen. His father was a general in the army of Gondor. In one battle, his father went over to the enemy camp, assuming they would surrender. They didn't accept, and quickly chased him off, trying to kill him. A spy had seen this, and thought they were plotting. He quickly told his lord Faramir about the incident. Faramir sent the guards to arrest Ithulen, and they did. Faramir ordered him burnt at the stake. Rykago watched as his Father was burning. He immediatly went on an emotional rampage. He killed all of the guards and tried to kill Faramir. His father uttered these lasts words to him "Fight for Gondor" Then, his father's head hung, and he was dead. Immediatly, Rykago burnt the stables down to the ground, and stole a white horse, which he named Pyros. He stormed out of Gondor, and headed for Mordor, not obeying his Father and going to avenge him, by destroying Gondor. He spent a long, long journey heading there. He finally reached the Black Gates. The guards demanded to know who he was and where he came from. He knew if he said Gondor, he would be killed. He said his name was Rykago and he came from Isengard. He told them he wanted to see Sauron the Deceiver. The orcs led him to Mount Doom. He slowly got off of his horse. He smelt the smell of sulfur. It burnt his throat. He looked up into the Eye of Mordor, and said "M'Lord, I have come to serve thee." With that, Sauron made him a Captain in the Army of Mordor. He has fought in many battles against Gondor and Rohan, however he still has one goal. His one goal is the destroy Faramir.<BR><BR>Personality: Rykago is a very serious person. He uses his stare to strike fear into his enemies, and the people who threaten him, hoping they will save their lives and stay away. He can get his hand on his sword, take it out of its sheath, and slice something in 1/4 of a second, which is remarkable. He has one flaw, however. His flaw is his pride. He will never admit losing to someone. Whether it's arm wrestling, or bow target practice, he will go on and on until he wins. He is trained with the Composite Bow. His father taught him all the skills that he knows, up until he died. Then, he had a knight, like him, train him, under the service of Mordor. He can shoot arrows with incredible speed, making him a born warrior. When in battle, he can remember his Father's death, and Faramir's face, and will go into a rage. He will hack at everything in his path. One time, he went into the back of the Gondorian line, and he started spinning around. The sword span with him, and it cut through everything that it touched. He knocked out 1/10 of the enemy all by himself. He has some difficulty shooting at ground units, however, for they are always moving. He much prefers to lie down on the ground, and pick off enemy archers that are on the walls. He now uses his father's war call, which he cries out, when he sees the enemy.