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Would you add the Epilogue to the ending of LOTR?
Yes, I would add it.
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No, leave it as it is.
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Post Posted: Sat Apr 19, 2008 4:25 pm Reply with quoteReplyTopBottom
The Epilogue

For some reason, the ending of LOTR where Sam says "Well, I'm back." has always been a letdown for me.

I recently read in The End of the Third Age , and I think it's also in The Defeat of Sauron, that Tolkien didn't intend to end it that way originally in his manuscript. There was an epilogue where Sam answers some of the questions of his children years later, just prior to the visit of King Elessar to the borders of the Shire. I found this a more interesting and upbeat ending to the story.

What do some of the rest of you think?

 

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Post Posted: Sat Apr 19, 2008 5:58 pm Reply with quoteReplyTopBottom


Cock-Robin, This is a tough question for me because the Epilogue is one of my favorite parts! I know Tolkien had wanted it to be included but the publishers talked him out of it saying, in effect, that it was already too long and 'who cares about what happens to the hobbits anyway?' AS IF!!!!!

Should it be added now? I don't know. I am glad I have read it and know it exists, but to change it now... I don't know.

As an aside.. I have the epilogue on my computer if anyone wants a copy I can send it to them if they give me their e-mail address.

 

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I say leave it as is. I have read the epilogue, and I think including it would have been a bad way to end LotR. Just the way jumps completely out of the story, turning all of the preceding into just a story within a story I think would somehow rob the journey's end of its savor. For me, at least. I don't think I'm explaining myself very well, but I just tend to think that books should end where the story ends, unless the end demands it, which I don't think is the case with LotR. (with movies, on the other hand, I've come to demand those little mini-epilogue clips at the end of the credits before I'll call it good Big Grin )
 

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Post Posted: Sat Apr 19, 2008 9:45 pm Reply with quoteReplyTopBottom


I quite like the Epilogue but I can understand why it was left out. You don't have to be a severe critic to find it excessively sentimental. It also doesn't work very well in terms of pacing; it's almost like another story starting off.

Tolkien was persuaded by others to omit the Epilogue; in fact he said it had been "roundly condemned". However, he seems to have at least partially agreed with the decision to leave it it out; feeling that although something about Sam and Elanor was needed, he could not devise anything that would not have "destroyed the ending", as he put it.

 

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Post Posted: Sat Apr 19, 2008 10:49 pm Reply with quoteReplyTopBottom


Here is part of what Christopher Tolkien writes about the epilogues in the HoME series book "Sauron Defeated"

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It is clear from the words 'we see Sam among his children' that my father was referring to the first version of the Epilogue.
He was persuaded by others to omit the Epilogue from The Lord of the Rings. In a letter to Naomi Mitchison of 25 April 1954 (Letters no.144) he wrote:
Hobbit-children were delightful, but I am afraid that the only glimpses of them in this book are found at the beginning of vol. I. An epilogue giving a further glimpse (though of a rather exceptional family) has been so universally condemned that I shall not insert it. One must stop somewhere.

He seems both to have accepted and to have regretted that decision. On 24 October 1955, a few days after publication of The Return of the King, he wrote to Katherine Farrer (Letters no. 173):
I still feel the picture incomplete without something on Samwise and Elanor, but I could not devise anything that would not have destroyed the ending, more than the hints (possibly sufficient) in the appendices.

 

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Post Posted: Sun Apr 20, 2008 12:52 am Reply with quoteReplyTopBottom


I've always loved the ending just as it is. Poignant but also hopeful. Smile

I think the Epilogue works best separate from the book, as an individual extra thing to think about.

 

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Post Posted: Sun Apr 20, 2008 12:04 pm Reply with quoteReplyTopBottom


Much as I love Sam (he's always been my favorite character), I have to agree with scirocco that the epilogue is overly sentimental. It's a blessing Tolkien was convinced to leave it out.

The 'well, I'm back' ending is perfect, and Sam becomes Bilbo's true heir (as Tolkien described him), completing his own 'there and back again' journey.

 

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Post Posted: Sun Apr 20, 2008 12:32 pm Reply with quoteReplyTopBottom


I do love the 'Well, I'm back' as well. It is a good ending. But perhaps the epilogue could've been a part of the Appendices. In any case.. when I first read the epilogue.. I thought it was a 'gem' of a find and I am so glad it was published even if it had not been included in the book. Something special for those who take the time to look I guess. Of course, there are many (P.J. included) who did not like the Scouring of the Shire and would have that left out of the book also... and that.. I strongly disagree with, but there is another thread with my thoughts on that subject. Razz
 

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Post Posted: Sun Apr 20, 2008 12:39 pm Reply with quoteReplyTopBottom


Well, I'm in agreement that if it is entered, it should be in the appendices along with that story of The Tale of Aragorn and Arwen. I do like that epilogue, it gives closure in an upbeat way. It's just IMHO that "Well, I'm back" is a letdown after all the great events that preceeded it. And I appreciate everybody's feedback. It was enlightening. Smile
 

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I think Tolkien didn't often listen to advice - he knew quite well for himself what worked and what didn't. The fact that he listened in this case, IMO, shows that he must have come to agree with the point that was made by whoever gave the advice (rather than just being persuaded against his own wishes).

For me, the ending as it is is perfect. It sums up one essential aspect of the story in three words: Sam's being able to carry on with his life successfully shows that the sacrifices everybody (but especially Frodo) made, have achieved what they could achieve. Frodo had to leave, but Sam is back.
Any additional information would not have added anything to this essential point. Once you've taken an interest in a character, it might be interesting to hear what happened to their great-great-grandchildren...but that would be a different story, then.

The achievement in writing even the longest novel is to decide what to tell in detail and what to skip. Tolkien had this whole universe as a background to his stories at the back of his mind, so leaving things out must have been even more difficult. He made good choices for LOTR, I think, and I'm always a bit surprised to hear that he almost overlooked that when it comes to the ending.

Maybe that's because going on and on about future generations is a very classic novel ending feature, while an ending like the one we have is thoroughly modern, so it's tempting to do it the way almost each book you read ends.

Our old choir conductor used to say the most important thing was to get the opening and the close right, then people wouldn't mind if there were flaws with things in the middle, as these two set the tone for the whole - and I think with this ending, Tolkien set a perfect tone, rounding everything off and yet leaving a wide open vista for the future at the same time. Smile

 

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All I mourn are the wonderful words of Rose. I reproduce them for those who haven't seen Sauron Defeated.

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"I never hoped at all, Sam" she said, "not until that very day; and then suddenly I did. About noon it was, and I felt so glad that I began singing. And mother said: 'Quiet, lass! There's ruffians about.' And I said: 'Let them come! Their time will soon be over. Sam's coming back.' And you came."


That is a jewel indeed.

 

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That is lovely, but then I have a hard time reconciling that with the way Rosie spoke to Sam when he did come back, criticizing him for taking his time in returning, and then for running back to his friends again as soon as he has returned. I know those are hobbit ways, but still, Rosie's character seems a bit inconsistent.
 

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It was nice to read the Epilogue in the HoME, and see what became of Sam later. But, I think that the ending of the book is simply perfect as it is; the epilogue somehow would have watered it down. Maybe that's because it is a bit sentimental in my opinion, too.
 

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Read the book....digest it as the ending is. Then after a little while (days, hours whatever,) read the epilogue and appendixes for "closure" for all the characters. That's what I do anyway. Wink
 








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I definately don't think it should be added. There is already a lot to digest. It's good for people to go and search for it elsewhere.
 

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I just don't Know! *eye twitches* So much good writing. *twitches twice*
 

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I like the idea of adding it to the appendices. Of course I'd like to see some of the details JRRT wrote about hobbits and other bits of Middle-earth history in his letters added to the appendices too! But the story itself should stand as it is.
 

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